|
polled.
Quote:
Originally posted by Hank Chinaski
Your first sentence is poorly written. Either:
"This board used to be all light and fun."
or:
"I remember when this board was all light and fun."
would have been better choices.
You really should not use both the "I remember" which implies the past and "used to be" which adds nothing.
|
Is it fringey or dtb that you're trying to impress with this post?
__________________
"In the olden days before the internet, you'd take this sort of person for a ride out into the woods and shoot them, as Darwin intended, before he could spawn."--Will the Vampire People Leave the Lobby? pg 79
|
