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Originally posted by Hank Chinaski
Your first sentence is poorly written. Either:
"This board used to be all light and fun."
or:
"I remember when this board was all light and fun."
would have been better choices.
You really should not use both the "I remember" which implies the past and "used to be" which adds nothing.
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The disturbing image of dtb or rp sitting on Hank's lap typing this into his computer now won't leave my mind.
Really, it's of their avatars on his avatar's lap.
