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Originally Posted by Hank Chinaski
at first i thought you were implying that i have a smallish penis, then I feared you wear perhaps outing me about the sores, so she wouldn't want to touch it too much, then I realized you might just mean she has man hands.
you should strive to make your prose more evocative of your intended themes.
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Awwwwww yeah, I knew it! I knew it was on! This was what I was talking about. Holy motherfucking shit, Hanky, put the beatdown on him! A to the fucking K! You don't fuck with the motherfucking Hank unless you want to be totally called out on your unevocative prose. Coltrane's gonna be thinking a little bit more about his intended themes before he starts trying that Zing shit on the Hank-monster.
