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Originally posted by patentparanyc
I know she was mocking me. but it was lame just the fucking same dude.
And like penske said. okay this time I provoked it but usually, typically unprovocated attack from her. I'm such a prole? Then I'm like the furniture and leave me alone. This has gone on far enough. I am friends with certain people and others can't stand me. Like that doesn't happen around here ever...? come on now.
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"This has gone on far enough." That's a little awkward, don't you think? It does not really make sense for something to occur or "go on" for some distance. I think maybe you should have said, "This has gone on long enough." Or, alternatively, "This has been taken far enough."
It is easy to underestimate the negative effect that type of awkward phrasing can have on the reader. Paying attention to these sorts of details could really turn things around here for you. Not that I am suggesting that you want to turn them around or that they should be turned around ...........
