Fashion Board 5-7-04 to 6-9-04

[sunnybunny]

Originally posted by ABBAKiss
I would take him in the kitchen and fuck him, but that's just me.

The thought had crossed my mind. But he kind of missed his chance during hte like 2 years that I had a crush on him.

[sebastian_dangerfield]

Originally posted by sunnybunny
Agreed. And I've successfully argued against candidates for my group based on poorly-proofed writing samples. I don't care so much about the writing style (as long as it's not impenetrable) but I just want to make sure they weren't too lazy to read through it and make sure it makes sense and is properly organized. if they can form an argument without showing that they haven't mastered cut and paste and spell check functions, and marginal knowledge of hte blue book, I'm happy. Unfortunately, that appears to be a tall order.

Agreed. Submitting things with typos might be the stupidest move ever. It ain't the typo that sinks your ass - its the fact that you didn't even bother to fix it. As long as its not on the signature pages, you can ALWAYS fix it. There's just no excuse for fucking up twice on the same doc.

[notcasesensitive]

Originally posted by sunnybunny
[stuff] ... Mr. Bunny ...

[more stuff] ... Mr. Bunny's ...

when did he get the promotion? did you make him sign a prenup? if so, did it address lunchbox custody issues?

[sebastian_dangerfield]

Originally posted by Did you just call me Coltrane?
They asked.

And I've only been out 2+ years.

No Latin - if you use latin, you're a fucking tool

Don't use phrases like "To wit" or any other 18th century-sounding constructions. "Heretofore, thereinafter" and other grammatical Frankensteins should also be removed. A few years back the fed Ct issued an advisory telling people to write as simply and concisely as possible.

Submit something written like PLF's prose.

[Did you just call me Coltrane?]

Originally posted by ltl/fb
Do you have anything you can use from work and redact? If you don't already know what length, you can call and tell them you have two things that you are looking at to redact, and one is longer and one is shorter, and which do they prefer?

Even if they (recruiting) ask for it, they (lawyers) may not read it.

I have briefs, memos, complaints, etc. My best writing is probably in the memos though (like Bilmore said, you don't have to follow such a strict format with the memos).

I really don't know if I'm a good writer or not. Don't take what I write here as an example. I'm much more immature re: law-related stuff...


One supervisor loves what I write; the other edits so much that I can't recognize it, although he apparently does this to everyone.

Anyway, thanks (everyone) for your input. I (honestly) appreciate it. So here's a thank you from Lloyd in Dumb & Dumber:

"Senior citizens, although slow and dangerous behind the wheel, really can serve a purpose. Now don't you go dying on me!"

Originally posted by Did you just call me Coltrane?
They asked.

And I've only been out 2+ years.

Too soon to make a move.

[sunnybunny]

Originally posted by notcasesensitive
when did he get the promotion? did you make him sign a prenup? if so, did it address lunchbox custody issues?

I'm just trying to be less obnoxious. It is understood that as long as he's alive, he owns it, when he dies, i get it.

Now, back to my *first crush* I tried to google him and find a nice picture of him, but all i came up with was this handsome man showing off his tattoo by *first crush's older brother* (who has a crush on me, but I declined).



And to think I could have hooked my wagon to that star and passed up the chance.

[sunnybunny]

Originally posted by paigowprincess
Too soon to make a move.

I moved after 5 months.

[ltl/fb]

Originally posted by sunnybunny
I'm just trying to be less obnoxious. It is understood that as long as he's alive, he owns it, when he dies, i get it.

Now, back to my *first crush* I tried to google him and find a nice picture of him, but all i came up with was this handsome man showing off his tattoo by *first crush's older brother* (who has a crush on me, but I declined).



And to think I could have hooked my wagon to that star and passed up the chance.

But he memorialized you on the right side of that guy's chest!

[baltassoc]

Originally posted by Did you just call me Coltrane?
They asked.

And I've only been out 2+ years.

If you're in litigation, submit something that you did enough work on to be on the signature line, and that bears a close resemblance to the work you actually did. Since it's a matter of public record (assuming it's not under seal), you don't even have to redact it. If you've never been primarily responsible for a pleading, I would submit a redacted draft that reflects your work.

My old firm read writing samples when they were requested. They were looking for the ability to make a reasoned argument and something that approximated Bluebooking. Typo graphic errors are bad, but if you'd submitted something that had been publicly filed and it happened to have a typo in it, it would likely have been overlooked.

On the transactional side, it's a bit harder. Redacted memo might work.

And every place I've ever worked since starting law school has checked at least one reference each time.

And Str8: got any Simon and Garfunkel at First Mariner in Baltimore?

[Did you just call me Coltrane?]

Originally posted by robustpuppy
That's not very nice, considering that Hank was willing to write what you could only hint at with your request for "advice."

Stan Gable and the entire Greek Council give this a thumbs down...

[dtb]

[i]Originally posted by Did you just call me Coltrane?
What type of writing sample is the most effective?

• Originally posted by bilmore
  Anything without typos.

Sing it, brother Bilmore.

So Coltrane, did I mention that I do proofreading on the side? I'm not cheap -- but I'm worth it, dammit!

[ABBAKiss]

Originally posted by sunnybunny


And to think I could have hooked my wagon to that star and passed up the chance.

They did a good job making the nipples seem like part of the tattoo.

Originally posted by sunnybunny
I moved after 5 months.

I understaned whyyou moved but cant remember how it was that you got the chance. My point was that Coltrane may have a negative in his resume by only have two years or whatever at htis work place. Not a negative for his career so much as for his desirabilty to potential employers.

of course, it depends on twhether he has an area of expertise or is some fungible ligtigator type who learend everything he needws to know in Civ Pro.

[sunnybunny]

Originally posted by ltl/fb
But he memorialized you on the right side of that guy's chest!

I know. I feel just awful. About as awful as when I convinced First Crush's Older Brother ("FCOB") to glue a red barn and farm animals to the roof of his car and FCOB drove around with it up there for like a week before he tore it down upon realizing that even such an extreme act of devotion on his part was not going to get my 14-year-old ass into his 21-year-old bed.